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Kirkus Review

Way back in fall of 2024, I paid Kirkus Reviews $400 for a professional review of The Extrapolated Man. It was, I figured, a way to get some credibility. I could post it on Amazon and so forth. And then the review came, and I was shall we say, “disappointed.” So much so that I set it aside for a few months before returning to it. Now of course you, my hypothetical reader, might reasonably think “Ah he got a bad review and he’s in a funk.” And it certainly wasn’t a great review. It was sort of middle of the road review. No, what pissed me off at the time was that it seemed like a careless, half-assed review. A review written after a quick skim, by a college student in need of some extra money who wedged it in between term papers. And that’s unkind, but hear me out. 

The Extrapolated Man is firmly, explicitly, consistently set in our solar system. Everything happens HERE. Even the plot element of a faster-than-light drive never gets our characters farther than Jupiter. And yet: “It’s a post-intergalactic war universe…” So let me think. Interplanetary is between planets, in our solar system. Interstellar is between stars, like, say, Star Trek. Intergalactic is between galaxies. Star Wars is nominally in a different galaxy, so I guess maybe kinda? Anyway I hit “intergalactic” and everything that followed was tainted. My dear reviewer was clearly not paying attention, so how could I trust him?

So there it sat for quite a while. I did eventually snip out a useful chunk and splash it around where it seemed like it might do some good. It’s really not a bad review. But I was, and am, unimpressed with the quality of the service.

Now I feel like a grumpy old man with unreasonable expectations, so without further ado, here’s the review.

Kirkus website

A treasure hunter in a Mars colony discovers a potentially dangerous record of an ancient man’s mind in Franklin’s SF novel.

In the far future, Maggie Lebedev lives in a colony on Mars and is a “technomancer,” meaning she can repair and reactivate old technology. It’s a post-intergalactic war universe, and Mars and Earth are controlled by tharks, which are fearsome, murderous four-legged, two-armed creatures. Maggie and her crew come across an old shipwreck that contains a nuclear thermal rocket engine, which they can sell, and they also find a skull. It has a “brainstone” attached, which stores a recording of a person’s life. Intrigued, Maggie gets the interface working and finds it belonged to Lt. John Gray of the torchship Tereshkova. He was a Space Force pilot, but oddly there’s no mention of him in the records. So why the coverup? As Maggie connects to the brainstone and pores through his memories, a new threat emerges when a mysterious villain appears and tries to seize the artifact. Maggie learns that Gray’s ship can travel in hyperspace, a capability the tharks deny being possible. If she can resurrect Gray in another body, perhaps the two of them can restore Gray’s ship and permanently subvert the rule of the tharks. It won’t be an easy battle, as “the old lizards who run the United Colonies are not going to give up a single joule without a fight.” Franklin’s space drama is vast in scope and in its efforts to create a new world with all new life forms and language. The premise is irresistible, and the narrative’s alternating perspectives across very different time periods on the Mars colonies work well. The protagonists are attractive and relatable characters with loads of talents and capabilities. The complexities of the novel can be overwhelming at times, however, and the space-age lingo and ever-evolving plot points are cumbersome and slow the story’s momentum.

SF that delivers a complex world and compelling characters. – Kirkus Reviews

Forward Indies Finalist!

Forward Indies Finalist Sticker

The Extrapolated Man has been selected as a 2024 INDIES Book of the Year Award Finalist! From their press release:

As part of its mission to discover, review, and share the best books from university and independent publishers, Foreword Magazine, Inc. hosts an annual awards program each year. Finalists represent the best books published in 2024.

The complete list of Finalists can be found at: https://www.forewordreviews.com/awards/finalists/2024/

“This year’s submissions have truly impressed me with their depth and diversity. Each finalist stands as a testament to the remarkable talent and vision within the independent publishing world. The INDIES not only celebrates these exceptional literary works but also plays a pivotal role in connecting them with librarians and booksellers, ensuring that a rich variety of voices continues to thrive in the world.” said Christopher Nesbit, INDIES Award Director.

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Winners in each genre, along with Editor’s Choice Prize winners and Foreword’s Indie Publisher of the Year, will be announced in June 2025.

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New cover!

I love the original cover – the back is a photo of the Pleiades by my friend Jerry Gipson, and the front was created by Charles Oines – and will continue to use elements of it. My original thought was that 90% of the hard science fiction books I surveyed featured a spaceship – usually dramatically unrealistic – and a planet. Phallus and chalice, as it were. So that’s what I asked for, and Charles delivered brilliantly, with a gorgeous and realistic model of the torchship UCM Tereshkova departing a partially terraformed Mars.

However, the cover said very little about the story (my bad), and did not resonate with “the market.” So I started looking for a new cover, which meant a new cover artist. I seriously considered generative AI. We’ve all seen amazing stuff at this point, and prompting seemed like a useful skill to pick up. But… solidarity amongst creators, and all that. I don’t want to be replaced by AI, after all.

I contacted a few artists whose work I admired, and those who replied were already overbooked. So on to the various services. I’d used Fiverr before for business graphics, but their covers looked like AI-generated slop to me. I eventually settled on Reedsy, which seemed expensive at $1K a pop, but had real people doing good work. 

After paging through hundreds of covers, I found a couple artists who looked like good fits. One of them was Christopher Doll, who did the covers for Becky Chambers’ Wayfarer series. Chris and I are peas in a pod… we both grew up in the same era of moon shots and Roddenberry’s Star Trek, and are avid modelers of science fiction subjects. (This is a golden age for modelers, by the way… the quality and breadth of subjects available now is amazing.) 

So we were off to the races.

And here is the new cover by Christopher Doll! It is just a lovely piece that captures the heart of the novel: the warbot into which Maggie has restored Gray’s backup is shown holding his skull, while Maggie points at an iceteroid streaking overhead, and the wreckage of the hyperglider looms in the background of the back panel. I can’t thank Chris enough for bearing with me as we developed the concept, and look forward to working with him again!

And now available in paperback!

The 6×9″ paperback version of The Extrapolated Man became available on Amazon late last night. What a rush! 

I feel like I’m just one step ahead of everything in this whole process, so I’m sure there will be a new set of learning experiences associated with actually publishing a book. But “The journey of a thousand miles…” and all that! Off we go 🙂

New Moon EBook Release

The Extrapolated Man is live on Amazon as a Kindle ebook!  It has been a long time coming, so this is really just an incredibly satisfying moment for me. And what better time to plant this seed than on a new moon. I hope it bears a bountiful harvest of readers. I think Hekate Binah would approve.

The print on demand (POD) paperback is in the review pipe, and will likely pop out late Monday night 3/11/2024. Amazon is a weird beast, and things take an unexpectedly long time to propagate through its subsystems. Hopefully my author bio will magically link up in due course, lol. 

Cover Reveal!

I am in the final stages of publishing my science fiction novel The Extrapolated Man on Kindle Direct, and am excited to share its cover with you in advance. Things are getting real!
 
It must have been twenty years ago that I came across a phenomenal tabletop game called Attack Vector: Tactical, published by Ken Burnside and with illustrations by Charles Oines. I took one look at the nuclear fusion powered torchships and said “Yes! Like that!”
 
Fast forward to early 2024, and I discovered Charles on Twitter, and asked if he’d be interested in doing a cover for a hard sci-fi novel.
I feel incredibly fortunate that he said yes, and here it is!